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Decent, unambitious sentences

Some attempt at variety:
sound punctuation

Range of accurate punctuation

Masterful control of sentences and varied punctuation

Composition and effect

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Some sense of purpose;
a suggestion of style

Consistent;
some appropriate stylistic features

Good tone/ clear views;
stylistic features

Use of ‘genre’ features clear;
stylish; crafted

Actually interesting

Spelling

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Poor

Dodgy
tryed familys dissapear

Okay
responsable physiclly

Good
Most correct
incl irregulars

Perfect,
with a range of vocab which demands a skill here